TJ,

This is awesome. I love the images here. You have images of meadows and a frothy beach. Beautiful
You seem to have done well with this form of poetry which I have never done. The words flow together well.

A lovely poem!

Awesome, the syllable count is perfect.
I love what you did in here. I found poetry form really tough and it seems like you wrote this one with ease.

This is really poetic, TJ. The images your words provoke are very uplifting. It is so nice to believe love is just around the corner:)

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

TJ, this poem was such a delight to read. I found it very moving and original. I love how you created this imagery about love, and how its moving in the shadows, teasing your emotions, and I love the metaphor of the wind kissing your cheek. I love your metaphors, they're brilliant! I like how you played with love in this poem, because it's gave me a sense of mystery about it, as though love crept into this person's life unexpectedly.

Great job! :)

This is one of those poems that fills the heart with warmth bringing out a smile..well done with the form..liked the read :)

TJ, This is a elegant piece you have pieced together... I love this form, well done ~

Awesome!........

I agree with everyone its really awsome:) great job;) 5/5

Fantastic piece. So short but so wonderful. I think its interesting how you can write such fabulous pieces with so few words. Excellent piece as usual.

This is a new style to me, but I have to say I really like it. Maybe I should try it sometime.

Well you delievered your emotions smoothly given the constraints of this style.

Well done TJ :)

Beautifully written

Great, very smooth and touching. I really love the word choice and cant wait to read the whole piece...GP

Wow this is beautiful and amazing a delightful read a greatful write I loved it 5/5