by Sami Jan 16, 2012
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
See they can throw you down and youll get back up, they'll do it again just to mess you up, |
by Paul Gondwe
Good wording and the rhyming is also good. i would suggest you put it into stanzas so that it flows better. The message in it was good coz people will throw lots of things at you but indeed...never give up |