Aw this is so sad. I can totally relate.
-Angel

That is so sad but its amazingly written

SAd but loss always is rather we initiate it or the other person. Your rhyme was good , smooth and flowing.
Good write

Aww Matt this poem was sad and emotional but I really enjoyed it. I like how you wrote this poem and structured it, it was different than most of your poems. I like the 'fast paced' of this poem, it affected me more and left an impact on me as the reader.

My favorite stanzas were:

Confused mind,
broken heart,
hopeful dream,
of a new start.

Shattered dreams,
torn up letters,
dusty pictures,
wishing it was better.

>> Amazing! Love the imagery.

Great job Mattie!

Dang. Simple and amazing. Terrific piece

Wow... Sadness powerfully written in few words, cuppycake.

5/5

- Shining Star (:

This is mysterious but great and I loved it excellent write 5/5