Dreamers Rose (collab with Maple Tree)

Candles flicker in dark of night
swirling visions captivate my thoughts
running away to summertime dreams
where dragonfly's sing a melodic tune.

- Summertime dreams and dragonfly's fit so well in this stanza to me, the imagery and description of this is wonderful, great stanza.

While the fragrance of devotion peak
celestial songs of unbridled temptation
wafting through majestic willow trees
on a breeze of silent longing

- Another beautiful stanza, flawless not much more to say about it

Fireflies dance in the light of the moon
a delicate Terpsichore of grace and beauty
celebrating the romantic splendor
of natures seductive images

- Nature is so well described in this poem, trough wonderful words like dancing fireflies :)

Waltzing clouds unite with stars
organic shadow lovers smile
crickets whisper in silent serenity
soft whispers sigh in silence
dreamers orchestrate a summer rose kiss.

- And a beautiful ending for an amazing poem, the last sentence left me in awe, great job overal :)

What a lovely collab!

I think the title was picked well as it beautiful and invites the reader in. It does what a title is meant to do and that is to draw the reader to the poem.

I think the poem is good in length and each stanza flows nicely from one to other and its hard to tell this is a collab because everything just sits together so well.

What I love most about this poem is how you and Maple Tree painted such a beautiful picture in my mind.

I have to agree with Lebonese Phoenix that this piece is enchanting.

5/5

Nice poem good props

Collabs are really special. Though they might sound simple but are actually very tough. Merging words, thoughts and creating one special image which keep running on reader's mind all the way...i find it tough and at the same time...interesting.

Loved the way you both got it perfect.

all the best and take care

Beautifully written; you both have an amazingly talent that works perfectly together that was impressively flawless.

5/5

-Heather