TJ-

I want to thank you for asking me to collab with you... it was alot of fun and I think we both created a really pretty piece here~ It was an honor to write with you~

Well this is a lovely collaboration.

Such beautiful images. Reading it made me go into a relaxed state of mind for about a minute then I realised I was at work and it went away lol
So I read your poem again ;)

I love the last stanza - Waltzing clouds unite with the stars. I think of clouds that are moving and they open up the sky and the stars can be seen.

Gorgeous!!!

Well done to the both of you

x

My gosh, what is there to say about this terrific piece. I mean I love this, the descriptions and images are beautiful and the word choice is magnificent. This piece shows how wonderfully you two write together. Stunning piece, 5/5 of course.

Very descriptive and thought provoking. Excellent collaboration work. I can't tell which verse is who's (and I know maple tree's words pretty good LOL)

I felt as though this poem should have rhymed while reading it. Not that it was bad without it, but the type of flow you produced together made it seem with the rhythm that it would be a rhyming poem, and I was surprised that the tone and rhythm was so flawless between two people. I don't know either of your styles so I truly cannot pick which stanza is related to which writer. The nature images are strong and a definite beauty.

This is great and fantastic imagery,, u two did a terrific job I loved it,, its kinda like a silent secret love,,a great poem 5/5

This collab was great! The first stanza was incredible and has got me really anticipating summer now!

two word choices I seriously LOVED:

wafting through majestic willow trees
on a breeze of silent longing

^ Wafting was a word I've never read in a poem, it was so refreshing to read a new word and it made these two lines so strong.

and

Waltzing clouds unite with stars

^ that was just incredible. The use of waltzing was seriously my favorite part of this entire piece. Beautifully described poem you guys I think you two did a great, descriptive job here!

Like I said-majestic!

Absolutely beautiful poem, I like your choice of words and the images you paint. I couldn't make out which part has been written by who.

Alright :)
such a joyous piece.. It's enchanting and full of harmony and melodies.

Beautifully written; you both have an amazingly talent that works perfectly together that was impressively flawless.

5/5

-Heather

Collabs are really special. Though they might sound simple but are actually very tough. Merging words, thoughts and creating one special image which keep running on reader's mind all the way...i find it tough and at the same time...interesting.

Loved the way you both got it perfect.

all the best and take care

Nice poem good props

What a lovely collab!

I think the title was picked well as it beautiful and invites the reader in. It does what a title is meant to do and that is to draw the reader to the poem.

I think the poem is good in length and each stanza flows nicely from one to other and its hard to tell this is a collab because everything just sits together so well.

What I love most about this poem is how you and Maple Tree painted such a beautiful picture in my mind.

I have to agree with Lebonese Phoenix that this piece is enchanting.

5/5

Candles flicker in dark of night
swirling visions captivate my thoughts
running away to summertime dreams
where dragonfly's sing a melodic tune.

- Summertime dreams and dragonfly's fit so well in this stanza to me, the imagery and description of this is wonderful, great stanza.

While the fragrance of devotion peak
celestial songs of unbridled temptation
wafting through majestic willow trees
on a breeze of silent longing

- Another beautiful stanza, flawless not much more to say about it

Fireflies dance in the light of the moon
a delicate Terpsichore of grace and beauty
celebrating the romantic splendor
of natures seductive images

- Nature is so well described in this poem, trough wonderful words like dancing fireflies :)

Waltzing clouds unite with stars
organic shadow lovers smile
crickets whisper in silent serenity
soft whispers sigh in silence
dreamers orchestrate a summer rose kiss.

- And a beautiful ending for an amazing poem, the last sentence left me in awe, great job overal :)