Mistaken Man

Its not about anyone i know, i was just trying to get a perspective on a view where a girl is with another guy but she should be with you as you would appreciate and notice her more :)

I love it who is it about </3

Again its one of my poems that needs to be altered, it does say on the poem thati need to alter it

Your feelings and intent are clear hear. Just go through it and make sure you fix the following items

I should be with you,
when the lights go all out
I think of you,
let me hold you
lying here I can't move
you should be my lady

your heart should be take(n) serious(ly)
(living) with you is like (being) in a house of glass
you have been hurt before,
i'm ready to do whatever
you want to in this world
i'm ready to
love you even more
is our love just
a mere paperclip (?)
the way i feel for (you)
does not come from
inside a beer bottle
i fight back tears
when you(are) out there
and not here (alone)
My intention is only to help. I am so glad people here do this for each other.