Your feelings and intent are clear hear. Just go through it and make sure you fix the following items

I should be with you,
when the lights go all out
I think of you,
let me hold you
lying here I can't move
you should be my lady

your heart should be take(n) serious(ly)
(living) with you is like (being) in a house of glass
you have been hurt before,
i'm ready to do whatever
you want to in this world
i'm ready to
love you even more
is our love just
a mere paperclip (?)
the way i feel for (you)
does not come from
inside a beer bottle
i fight back tears
when you(are) out there
and not here (alone)
My intention is only to help. I am so glad people here do this for each other.

Again its one of my poems that needs to be altered, it does say on the poem thati need to alter it

I love it who is it about </3

Its not about anyone i know, i was just trying to get a perspective on a view where a girl is with another guy but she should be with you as you would appreciate and notice her more :)