Kalology

by Mattias Ostling   Jan 17, 2012


Your bottomless eyes,
full of joy and happiness
Your golden hair,
caressing your shoulders
Your full lips,
seducing with every whisper
Your curved body,
enticing saints and sinners alike

Superlatives are insufficient
Unable to describe
your kindness, your beauty
and your unwavering strength

I gaze at you, my Love,
and I gaze at an Angel

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  • 12 years ago

    by christopher

    Really like a good love letter not bad i get from this poem you are lacking in ability to truly feel emotion as i you seem to write on the periphary all the time but it is not bad keep writing

  • 12 years ago

    by Mattias Ostling

    Thanks for pointing out the typo. Appriciate it a lot.
    I capatalized the sentences I did to indicate a new sentence, there's supposed to be a slight pause before every sentences that starts with a capatalized one.

    Thanks for the positive feedback everyone!

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    "suducing with every whisper"

    It should be seducing, not suducing :)

    The poem was sweet and had a very intimate feel. I feel like the use of capitalizing the lines in which you did kind of threw off the reading for me, but that's a personal preference. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Oh my gosh this poem just made me melt. Seriously Matt, this was just a beautiful poem probably written to very sweet deserving person.
    Word choice = excellence
    Ending = a very sweet way to proclaim your love
    Title= so unique and intriguing!

    That would sum up how I felt about this write! Always great stuff coming from you :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Renegade Angel

    I love the imagery and the being of the poem. this poem gets my attention in lovely ways.WellDone. :)

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