Oh how elegant this precious piece is.... Beautiful!!!

Love the descriptiveness. In my minds eye, and with your description, here, I get a glimpse of an angelic aura of light surrounding her. Nicely done.

Without doubt 5/5

I agree with the above comments.
This piece is more than well done. Just beautifully composed.

I love the imagery and the being of the poem. this poem gets my attention in lovely ways.WellDone. :)

Oh my gosh this poem just made me melt. Seriously Matt, this was just a beautiful poem probably written to very sweet deserving person.
Word choice = excellence
Ending = a very sweet way to proclaim your love
Title= so unique and intriguing!

That would sum up how I felt about this write! Always great stuff coming from you :)

"suducing with every whisper"

It should be seducing, not suducing :)

The poem was sweet and had a very intimate feel. I feel like the use of capitalizing the lines in which you did kind of threw off the reading for me, but that's a personal preference. Well done.

Thanks for pointing out the typo. Appriciate it a lot.
I capatalized the sentences I did to indicate a new sentence, there's supposed to be a slight pause before every sentences that starts with a capatalized one.

Thanks for the positive feedback everyone!

Really like a good love letter not bad i get from this poem you are lacking in ability to truly feel emotion as i you seem to write on the periphary all the time but it is not bad keep writing