Nitin, sadness is clear in your words. Gives the reader a sense of a person fading away, losing their future and slipping to the past, then slipping away from life. It seems the person is aware of what is happening to them through their emotions but helpless to stop it. Well done.

Your poems always have so much depth and strength. Doesn't matter if it's love or sadness you put your all in every word.
I really liked this , you penned what most of us feel from time to time, part of life I guess
Excellent write, I've missed reading your work

Staring at mirror right through an empty vase

^^This line sets the scene and the mood for the reader showing the sadness that lies within.

Drowning in tides of memories

^^I like how you have brought tide and memories together; when we lose ourselves within memories it engulfs us like the tide that is coming in...loved this line!

While standing at the edge of a river
Wondering if its the water shining
Or may be my tears have turned silver

^^I could visualize a person standing in front of a mirror and that is what this reflects..well at least for me..very sad though.

While dancing with flames of torture

^^Another great line! Dancing with flames of torture..the reader can feel the despair and undying hopelessness in this very line..

Overall, a heart tugging write with emotions that runs deep. I also like the rhyme scheme you have used. Its good to read a poem from you after a long time..hope all is well with you. Keep penning!

A write full of sadness that tears at my heart strings. "Now even my own reflection has left me"! This line made me sit back and reflect. How often do we look in a mirror and really see ourselves.

An excellent write my friend. Now I'm off to "drown in tides of memories".

Superb lines~

These fingers have lost their grip
Face doesn't smile anymore
Once blooming with bright colors of life
Now even my reasons are gone

Good job! 5/5!

Cheers,
Ray

Hmm, yes the sadness can be read all throughout this poem in your words. Your feeling are poured into each line and echoed between the lines. The had a simple structure that was easily kept and a good flow though it did seem a little messed up with the rhyming you had. I could tell in places that you were forcing the rhyme. You would shape the stanza so it would fit the rhyme but it sometimes messed up the flow or messed up the imagery.

"Drowning in tides of memories
While standing at the edge of a river
Wondering if its the water shining
Or may be my tears have turned silver"
^^^
This was a clever stanza and I liked the imagery in being drowned while you were only standing at the edge. Also the rhyming of silver and river was a bit forced but I think the stanza still carried itself. Your emotion made up for a lot in this poem. I could tell that you were writing your heart away into these lines and it is evident with each word of each stanza.

Overall, I liked the poem and I think with some more adjustments this poem could really have a strong overall foundation and stronger message. Still the poem was effective in portraying your feelings and helping you open up. I am glad to see you writing and also improving as a poet. Great job and keep writing!

Deep and touching write. the imagery though sad is beautiful painted by your words.

/Now even my own reflection has left me
// very profound lines ... i relate it with a feeling of nothingness ... of worthlessness.

/Accompany me to my funeral
Dig six feet below to my future
//
I really loved the ending. so much sadness in them. beautifully expressed :)

This one is nice

this one is best

Drowning in tides of memories
While standing at the edge of a river
Wondering if its the water shining
Or may be my tears have turned silver
this one is nice

this one is best

Well how did I miss this masterpiece! This was such a strong piece and I really enjoyed every word. Great work as always :] -Nik

So touching words... Excellent!
5/5 for you!