by Angel Jan 17, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
When I stand outside and look up at the sky I cant help to think about you. I miss you so much dad! I just wish I had the change to say goodbye, but before I had the change you where gone. It was so sudden. Why is life so cruel. I wish I could see you just once more. Just know that I really love you lots. Its sad to think you will never be at my wedding or see my children. Why did you have to die??? Its not fear!!! But then again live isn't fear. I miss you and love you!!! ïŒ |
by broken sword
Nice poem i like it |
by Angel
Thanks. Yeah sorry about some of the words. I'm afrikaans. But still I need to work on it. |
by christopher
Not bad well done keep writing and buy yourself a dictionary there are a few words wrong but overall i liked your poem. |