Missing

by Ole Carsten   Jan 17, 2012


Now it is a new morning
You are stretching and yarning
Alarms are ringing to loud
I wish I was a cloud

Taking the route to you
Soon I have to do
Else my body would explode
Weeks and days is a period

I am really missing
Our sweet kissing
I miss our cuddle
I must step on the trottle

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  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Such a wonderful poem. I really liked how you expressed what you miss in the 3rd stanza. That was wonderful.

    I felt your rhyming was being forced in some lines coz the words that were put where there just to rhyme not necessarily to make a point.

    Overall, this was a great poem written for someone you love and miss. 5

  • 12 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Hi

    Yes go step on the speeder, and have fun.

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