Comments : Shrouding Paroxysm

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    A very powerful poem hun,

    The image that you are just a grain of sand. Something so small. The way you see yourself hun but you are no such thing x

    I could very much relate to this poem.

    Well done

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Ur poems r so gud to read..

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    At times we are better off we certainly can do bad by ourselves