I still love you......:'(

by Rihanna   Jan 18, 2012


Boy: i saw her today
girl: i saw him today
boy:t seems like it's been forever
girl: i wonder if he still cares
boy: she looks better than before
girl: i couldn't stop staring at him
boy: i asked how things are going
girl: i asked about his new girlfriend
boy: i'd pick her over any girl i'm with
girl: he's probably really happy
boy: i can't even look at her without crying
girl: he couldn't even look at me
boy: i told her i missed her
girl: he didn't mean it
boy: i meant it
girl: he doesn't mean it
boy: i love her
girl:he loves his new girlfriend
boy: i held her for the last time
girl: he gave me just a freindly hug
boy: and then i went home and cried
girl: then i went home and cried
boy: i lost her..=[
girl: i love him......</3

- this is soo sad...

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  • 12 years ago

    by elijah

    Its so good n so true

  • 12 years ago

    by meliLOVE

    Aww this made me want to cry i can relate to this.

  • 12 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    I really liked this piece its well written :) the way you structured the poem to parallel what each boy and girl responses are was creative, well done

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by lost angel

    That is soo beautiful i know it is sad and everything but sometimes people are to scared to tell others the way they feel about them and they dont relize that that person feels the same way. it was marvolous :)

  • 12 years ago

    by VeinsofHate

    Unbelieveably heart wrenching, yet it the best way. perfect

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