Its really a great poem 5/5 from me:)

Wow, Jenni, that was so powerful and deep. I loved every line; another amazingly unique poem of yours!!! (:

5/5

-Heather

Jenni-

i just want to say that this piece really got me. I am not one to break down a poem... I just sum it all up to usually one word... "Powerful" comes to mind.... your poem here is riveting!! well done~

Hey hun,

I am glad you put what the word egalitarianism meant as I had no idea!
This poem is yes very strong

because I disguise myself;
an invisible, cold mirror
reflecting society.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I love this stanza. Cold mirror reflecting society. Saying that the society is cold itself - the people are.

Awesome

x

Jenni my adopted sister :-) you have out done yourself. I am truly in awe of this piece in fact going in my favs.

Your creativity always amazes me..

Lovely write!

Lovely write!I'm passionate about human rights .......politics since we fought long and hard to remove sign boards for 'whites only' that barred me as a mix-breed from entering certain places.........excellent piece

It is a beauty good job well done