Comments : Want to play a game?

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You have the makings of a good poem, dark and disturbing. I found only one flaw

    Childre laugh outside

    Children?

  • 12 years ago

    by Haley Elizabeth

    Thank you for finding that spelling error and thank you for the nice comment

  • 12 years ago

    by His angel from hell

    Could of done better.