This was lovely. Be it a bear or a little chicken they all need their mother's touch and leaning experience. Very nice indeed!

Now this double haiku is precious.... and really a delight.... you brought a sweet loving and tender message to light in a beautiful structured form... and thats a gift.... love this piece~

Cute poem buddy ^___^ See me read it!! :p -Nik

Very nicely done.

Love this form :-)
You did an excellent job letting us see the images you penned so vividly

Cute piece!Loved it.

Wow. I am in awe of this poem. The wording again is very simple but the gentle touch is there. The first line makes me smile because I can imagine any mother with child waking up early. The children are wide awake and the mother a bit grumpy. Haha. I agree with hellon here every child needs their mothers gentle touch. I liked the somewhat double view point here. You have the mother who is sleeping and the cubs awaiting adventure. There is beauty in such a loving poem. Well done.

Very well and so warm written