Comments : Between the two of you

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    I love it

    Writing and expressing what u feel I love it..letting everything out..

    5/5 well done <333

  • 12 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Honestly, to me it appeared to be 'thinking loud' than a poem & going through all those complicated thoughts was pretty tough but then as you mentioned, when heart is involved, nothing is simple.

    I liked the simplicity and though things being so complexed...you managed effectively to engage the reader and relate to it in someway.

    all the best and take care