F.R.I.E.N.D.S

by True Happiness   Jan 19, 2012


Freakishly weird people, who
Run around pertending to care. There all
In descises fooling the world.
Enjoying my pain is all they do, and they
Never make me smile. I'ts
Dangerous games they always play. Trying to
Seduce me into their crazy world.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jhierren Paz

    Wow, you did it great. Well written.

  • 12 years ago

    by bobbiejo

    I love ur poem my bestest buddy love ya

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I love this type of poetry and you managed to produce a really good poem in this style.

    I liked the whole attitude of the piece and how you were honest.

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    NICE!

    You made an acrostic, that's pretty good.
    I wasn't expecting this type of content in the poem.

    We usually refer to friends to someone who cares for us rather than someone who doesn't.
    So it really surprised me. But I think I understood what you were trying to say
    that's why I like this piece. I see it more of a sarcastic type of poem. well done.

    By the way, the capital letters at the beginning of each line are fine that way the reader can tell that its an acrostic.

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