Comments : F.R.I.E.N.D.S

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    NICE!

    You made an acrostic, that's pretty good.
    I wasn't expecting this type of content in the poem.

    We usually refer to friends to someone who cares for us rather than someone who doesn't.
    So it really surprised me. But I think I understood what you were trying to say
    that's why I like this piece. I see it more of a sarcastic type of poem. well done.

    By the way, the capital letters at the beginning of each line are fine that way the reader can tell that its an acrostic.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I love this type of poetry and you managed to produce a really good poem in this style.

    I liked the whole attitude of the piece and how you were honest.

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by bobbiejo

    I love ur poem my bestest buddy love ya

  • 12 years ago

    by Jhierren Paz

    Wow, you did it great. Well written.