Once Upon A Time I Was Strong

by La Reina De Corazones   Jan 19, 2012


Broken hearts lay on the floor
Shattered dreams are powder, spread on the bed it lays upon
A girl with not a thing left in her heart stares are u with cold dead eyes

Misery consumes a joker princess
Chaos becomes the lover of an angel
Darkness makes the dark princess shiver out in joy
Patience is gone from the heart as it breaks because of u

Did everything that I loved have to be taken from me?
Wasn't I strong enough to fight the pain, yet I failed but I don't know how!
Healing from the scars time has given me over time I stare down the road of recovering the girl I was once
Oh how a Once upon a strong girl everyone loved became broken
And how I'm trying to fix that careless mistake!!

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  • 12 years ago

    by Mello193

    Again deep, dark. and good read

  • 12 years ago

    by Adan7777

    I like your poems.
    Adan7777

  • 12 years ago

    by Emmanuel Pineda

    This was very moving. I REALLY enjoyed it. Good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I feel the content of this poem is good and the way they are expressed is wonderful. The only problem i saw with this is that the flow somehow goes out of line, i would suggest some commas here and there and punctuating it properly.

    i do believe you are a strong girl, you just havent realised that potential you have yet. Overall, a great poem that i really enjoyed, it tells such a wonderful story about a girl who is just not sure of what she can achieve yet.

  • 12 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    Not bad, but it needs to be fluent in some areas.
    I myself keep updating my poems to make them flow more better up to the point where people say they loved the poem, mission accomplished yay lol :)

    Good job tho

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