It shows true feelings, and comes from the heart:)
Great poem 5/5

Im sry I donno y it was posted 4 times

Im sry I donno y it was posted 4 times

Im sry I donno y it was posted 4 times

Not bad, but it needs to be fluent in some areas.
I myself keep updating my poems to make them flow more better up to the point where people say they loved the poem, mission accomplished yay lol :)

Good job tho

I feel the content of this poem is good and the way they are expressed is wonderful. The only problem i saw with this is that the flow somehow goes out of line, i would suggest some commas here and there and punctuating it properly.

i do believe you are a strong girl, you just havent realised that potential you have yet. Overall, a great poem that i really enjoyed, it tells such a wonderful story about a girl who is just not sure of what she can achieve yet.

This was very moving. I REALLY enjoyed it. Good job!

I like your poems.
Adan7777

Again deep, dark. and good read