Comments : Hurry Home

  • 12 years ago

    by Hellon

    Waiting for a child to be born is always very exciting and..sometimes you thing the event will just never come and...then it does.

    I could tell this poem came straight from your heart and, although I found your i's instead of I's distracting (please fix them) the love for your wife and unborn child really out shone these little errors. A lovely dedication...good luck!