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Thanks for the constructive feedback. I think I was drunk when I wrote this and just randomly wrote what I was thinking.

Thank you do much for the compliment. I haven't been on here for a while. When my brother died it was like some poetry tap turned on in my head from out of nowhere and it's died down again as I've gotten over it.

Hmm well it was interesting. Don't get me wrong But after reading your other poems i expected greater from you. You really are a brilliant writer But this poem is sort of weird. I understand that there's pain behind the whatever but maybe the sentence structure should be changed. Then again what do i know? Sorry. I still liked your previous poems!