Beautifully penned the saddest emotions when it comes to love.. Amazing job, cupcake.
5/5
- Shining Star (:

Awww this poem is so sad, but sweet at the same time. I love the title, it was really nicely written. I also reallly loved the first stanza, I could feel the emotions you expressed so well. You told a sad but bittersweet story.

Really enjoyed your poem. Well done! :)

This is. Beautiful and amazing I loved it an lovely great write with so much passion an desire and emotion very greatly done Mattie full stars from me :) 5/5

This is one of those poems that make you choke back a sob. "Wow" I sounded girly huh? anyway it was awesome, the ending was perfection.