I like this i can feel the pain in it and the way you have those three lines you repeat but change the order to match what you wrote is brilliant

Great flow it could be a song really well thought out somthing unquie in my eyes
well penned

I like the emotives this piece carries...that beautiful disaster of how you let me go. Honestly this wording is brilliiant. That beautiful disaster. I like this. It reflects thoughts, place and emotion well.