by believeinlove87 Jan 20, 2012
category :
Life, society /
other
There comes a point in every body's life |
Wow, Holly, I think this is one of your best poems... It was so real, so sad, yet so true. It really touched me, and I know how much this means to you, but it's also something many people can relate to because we've all lost people that we love and cared about. |
I'm still blown away by you using grammar!! Haha. Anyway.. I agree with Chevalier des Fleurs. |
by Chevalier des Fleurs
You may not be sure of the poem but it is magical and delightful. Full of beauty and passion. The words you use the way you've put this poem together is utter amazement! Very strong, inspiring, and allows the reader to reflect on their life and value and appreciate life. Makes me want to reach for my dreams because you never know how much time you truly have in this life. 5/5 Excellent! |