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  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    This to me is a very beautiful and sensual poem

    It's like you are trying to savour the moment with your lover

    From dusk to a dawning sunrise

    you complete me, ending with a crescendos kiss

    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    What a lovely picture here.

    Awesome

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by ronel mccarthy

    "Let us freeze this moment' ! -as if you immortalize eternal .

    Portraying a woman who wants more than the physical/she wants real love that completes her !beautiful !

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Awesome poem, the flow is like glass but the wording and emotion radiates beauty