Silence...

by ItDoesntMatter   Jan 21, 2012


She asks me the reason behind my silence these days...

I tell her that I want her to have someone who..

shall treat her better than I ever could..
shall be a better human than I ever was..
shall love her more than I was ever able to..
shall be valued by her which I never was...
shall keep her happy..

But somewhere deep inside me, I want her to receive the same afflictions from him, which she gave me

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  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Shadows

    I don't want to believe that you really meant what you wrote.Even when the heart is broken to pieces,it can't stand to see their love in pain.It is true love, love that is totally committed to the welfare of the other.

    But somewhere deep inside me, I want her to receive the same afflictions from him, which she gave me

    To get such thoughts is natural though we don't wish to see it happen.Sometimes we wish the person who inflicted pain knew about the huge mess they left behind.

    5/5 for letting out the heavy sighs.

  • 12 years ago

    by christopher

    Good i like it original and real keep writing. fourth line last word "was" i think is a bad choice word. otherwise not bad.

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    I've learned that's a dark place to wander. . .

  • 12 years ago

    by Ste

    Very well worded to my mind. Perfect explanation.

    (Perhaps one too many "was" in

    "shall be valued by her which I was never was..." ?)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    It is a deep and emotional write that you have penned in this piece...When the one we love with all our heart, hurts us...A person wants them to be happy and at the same time, wants them to feel the pain they have inflicted upon you... It truly is a sadness that is beyond words...powerful piece ~

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