by John Dlyan Boone BABY Jan 21, 2012
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I miss you with all my heart, |
Appericiated ! |
by Rina Dakari
It rings true for me. I don't know much about form and structure but I like the poem. I rated (Excellent). |
by Ruqayyah TG
I really like the poem, but think it would be more appealing to the reader if all 'i's were capitalized, other than that, I like your strong words with tone of anger, I rate (Good) ! |