Comments : So far from home

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I think that this poem is quite interesting and it definately creates a somewhat scary atmosphere. I think that the title was well chosen because it fits to the poem, doesn't tell too much, but also underlines that it might end up getting uncomfortable for the speaker. Usually people associate good feelings with being home and safety, but since the scenery is "far from home" it won't get too comfortable.
    I like the fact that you used questions because they show the speakers frustration and hopelessness. The only thing I do not like too much is the end of the poem, the message you try to convey.