You sure have some emotives going on here. Your word usage is good and the content is good, the message is profound. maybe just go through it and check your spelling. I always write three or four times on paper to be sure I got it then I post. But still, I post mistakes or worst all the time and I'm just glad people tell me b4 too many others see it.
You have good content with this piece, you deserve for it to be right. Write?

Thx :), some of my poems do need to be altered as i do write down on here first with my ideas for a poem then come back to alter it later

Short and sweet. Yet beautiful and powerful.

In the third line though, did you really mean plaque or did you mean plague???