Comments : Our Silly House Guest

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Pure delightful magic :-) I smiled all the way through this awesome piece.
    We need more sunshine in our lives, more little innocence that create playful havoc; haha
    This is the poem of the day, thanks for the magic

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Haha I agree ,, too :)

    I like the easiness all through. but... aww sorry, I don't get who is she at the end. Is it you? your ego?

    :P
    lol, I feel dumb for not knowing. maybe I didn't read carefully. But overall, great!

    * Edit: I read it again. I think someone of your imagination :P or youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu?

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Its an awsome great poem:) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    I loved the flow here and as TJ said it is pure magic.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    What a fun poem!

    I absolutely loved it. I was really enticed throughout the whole poem.

    I loved the rhyming and the little twist in the end of the poem.

    It made me smile

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Pretty. Fun. Mischievous thoughts.
    Playful and nonharmful pranks. Lol
    When I was reading the poem, I was like ok.
    Big smile from cheek to cheek. Who might that be?
    Is the author blaming all of these on a little kid?
    Then I continue, lol. I was like nah, it's probably the author who is doing that.. Haha.

    And at the end I found my answer.
    But shhh..I won't tell anyone.

    But i wonder if your husband reads your poetry?

  • 12 years ago

    by James Pike

    Yes, Everlasting I DO read her poems. I knew it wasn't the pixies, even though she insists it is. I knew it was her. LOL

  • 12 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    Definitely a delight to read, I couldn't help but smile the whole way through. Much enjoyed :)

  • 12 years ago

    by John Dlyan Boone BABY

    I love this so much good job keep it up so beautifu

  • 12 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    How cute.... I absolutely adore this, and I think that you are a master at rhyming flow.
    I love a poem that makes me smile and you have done just that. I will never tell, I promise.

  • 12 years ago

    by Half Husband Half father

    Hahahaha awesme

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Haha, sounds like my little Nellie Bligh... remember her? Pixie haha... love this one!