Daisy Ring

Beautifully true! I like this.

Like the rays of the sun, shine
with warmth and passion.

^^this is my most favorite stanza but it's hard cuz I loved it all :) it's a fantastic great friendship poem and an amazing poem and excellently written :) 5/5

The ring of friendship is
an assortment of personalities
adhereing to its center forming
allegience to each other.

Just reading this stanza alone, wow. You have penned down a lovely poem that i found was deep and the thinking behind it was also deep for your choice of words and how you use them is wonderful.

The following part caught my attention so much

"Unlike the flower where the
pedals are many, the number
is no less important , for true
allies are forged in love and trust."

This sentence are so TRUE!!! Friendship is base in love and specially in trust. Any relationship is base on communication but the trust is always the one that ruins it when it lacks it.

Well done, I mean more than well done.

amazing.

This poem flows so well. I loved how you kept things smiple as there is a beauty in simplicity.

Great poem

5/5