by Ms Happiness
I hope the letter ur trying to convey, has reached everyone. This is the hard killing reality. |
by Kiko
You have some nice poetic talent, but I think it needs a bit of refining. I don't like the idea of a "letter." I would just use the second part here and drop the rhymes, since they seem a bit forced. Also, I would try to stay away from using cliches. |
by NIDAL
Thank you for your comments. Poetry is a journey and I sincerely appreciate your constructive input. |
by Rusheena
Beautiful! |
I got my eyes wet ! |