Comments : A letter From Syria To Al-Assad

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I hope the letter ur trying to convey, has reached everyone. This is the hard killing reality.
    Great poem:) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Kiko

    You have some nice poetic talent, but I think it needs a bit of refining. I don't like the idea of a "letter." I would just use the second part here and drop the rhymes, since they seem a bit forced. Also, I would try to stay away from using cliches.

    • 12 years ago

      by NIDAL

      Thank you for your comments. Poetry is a journey and I sincerely appreciate your constructive input.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Beautiful!

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    I got my eyes wet !