Like this one also. well written

You definitely expressed the suppression of slavery Paul..well done :) x

Nice description, great feeling :)

What initially drew me into this was the title.

From beginning to end you had me hooked on this piece.

"Its funny how it all began
He came on his strange animal
which had two wheels
and shouted loudly saying
he brought the good news"

I love how you started this. I can imagine this being told as a story to people. It's interesting how you said "it's funny." Because it most of been a sight to see a pale-faced man on such a strange animal.

The words and the imagery made this a great poem. :) 5/5

Nice poem.... Very well written!