U r really a gd writer:) Im sry Im bad in commenting;)

^ haha Emily :P

Marya, I think as a general overview that would be enchanting to read, but if you want honest critique, you should work more on connecting ideas together maybe separating lines to make equal sized stanzas... and remove the <3 because the love shown really occupies this sign :)

some blemishes here and there, some structural enhancement, and your poem would be very good.

Patience, is key to survival.. You may really need to wait a little longer, learning; Nothing good, comes speedily coz, Yes! It takes some time, but, When delayed, there's still more to Find! A real great job! Thank u 4 sharing.