Precious Gift !

by Marya   Jan 23, 2012


They say friends are
rare to find today,
I agree
I tried hard to look
for good ones ,
I experienced alot to find her
My friend, precious gift i call ...

Imagine how it feels finding one
that fills your life with
hope, happiness and grace..
She's someone I turn to
when my spirit needs lift & help..
She's always their for me
No matter how much
dificulties she faces..

Some think i use hyerbole,
while describing her favors
I truely dont ..
She's one in a million , i assure
caring, loyal, humorous,
fun and most special
her innocence
One of a kind, much more different
than others, I believe

She taught me a lot,
she showed me what
friendship seems like

I have one thing to tell
how much love
I hold for you dear
You'll never expect ..
Yout friendship,
I will never regret

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  • 12 years ago

    by ronel mccarthy

    That is true friendship -she is selfless .lovely write

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Marya, that is a good piece where your friendly heart pumps amazingly! yet to make that a perfect poem, here are some props for you to consider:

    - try to make the words on one line not more than 5 or 6 because the eye would be more relaxed.

    - capitalize all the 'i's ..

    - make your piece not a one part, on contrary, make it several parts maybe 5 lines in each part..

    - a lot .. instead of.. alot

    - use 'and' instead of '&'

    - she's always there for me.... instead of.. their for me

    - I understand you love the symbols: <3 and =) ... I think they are reflected in your words, so they aren't needed much.

    ..

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Thnx Marya:') happiness tears lol, Im glad to have a great friend like u:)

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