by PinkyPrincess Jan 24, 2012
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Walking hastily on a Monday morning, |
Very true indeed; no aid can cure deep wounds, only the will to claim victory always through the help of ones folks. With unconditional care and concern, one can survive any emotional setback or engraved physical scars. Keeping faith ever strong and been optimistic is the key to peace of mind. The imagery is very vivid, playing each stanza like a motion picture. An exquisitely inspiring poem, very thoughtful and heart warming. I can feel the fear through the words, then a glimmer of hope to end it all, happily ever after. Keep it up! take care :-). |
by Maple Tree
I love this piece..... The simplistic and elegant way you write is priceless.... Very inspirational... the ending made me teary... wonderful! |
by Meme
This is a master piece Pinky !! |
by Paul Gondwe
Perhaps these scars will remain hidden and unseen, |
by Lioness
You know this kind of reminds me of when we're sick or stressed, it can take us longer to heal if we don't take care of our emotions. |