Comments : How to Heal a Wound

  • 12 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    Wow, just amazing and so powerful! I Love it!! I can relate to this and it reminded me again how EVERY person has some sort of wounds and we need to remember this... be loving/caring towards others, ALWAYS! :) Good work my friend!

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    Wow this left me speechless its so good and so relatable. you got talent keep using it :)
    -Angel

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I like the comparisons between the external and internal bruises. Very well done :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Aww this is sweet :) This poem speaks the truth that is for sure. Both kind of scars and wounds are sad because what happens to people can be very tragic and heart breaking to hear and see. I like what you've done though. You've given hope to heal those wounds that we see and even hide.
    Very nice as always!
    Chels

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Shadows

    Healing words overflowing with hope.Loved it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    You know this kind of reminds me of when we're sick or stressed, it can take us longer to heal if we don't take care of our emotions.

    There is a connection and you have written it well!

    Awesome job hun

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Perhaps these scars will remain hidden and unseen,
    and there will never be a band-aid created to heal them,
    but strength, love and determination will mend the hurt,
    and we will be able to recover from our deepest wounds.

    You have penned down a beautiful piece that had me thinking deeply. With a simple wound, you wanted my mind to other things. This was my fav stanza, just loved how you ended it with hope and faith or recovering though you might have been in pain. We as a people need to have hope and faith and well.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    This is a master piece Pinky !!
    I think its one of my favorites by you. I loved how I can easily read through it and see it all infront of me, I think this poem would bring alot of people a remedy they always wanted to find.

    Great poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I love this piece..... The simplistic and elegant way you write is priceless.... Very inspirational... the ending made me teary... wonderful!

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Very true indeed; no aid can cure deep wounds, only the will to claim victory always through the help of ones folks. With unconditional care and concern, one can survive any emotional setback or engraved physical scars. Keeping faith ever strong and been optimistic is the key to peace of mind. The imagery is very vivid, playing each stanza like a motion picture. An exquisitely inspiring poem, very thoughtful and heart warming. I can feel the fear through the words, then a glimmer of hope to end it all, happily ever after. Keep it up! take care :-).