Wow, just amazing and so powerful! I Love it!! I can relate to this and it reminded me again how EVERY person has some sort of wounds and we need to remember this... be loving/caring towards others, ALWAYS! :) Good work my friend! |
by Angel
Wow this left me speechless its so good and so relatable. you got talent keep using it :) |
by Decayed
I like the comparisons between the external and internal bruises. Very well done :) |
by Chelsey
Aww this is sweet :) This poem speaks the truth that is for sure. Both kind of scars and wounds are sad because what happens to people can be very tragic and heart breaking to hear and see. I like what you've done though. You've given hope to heal those wounds that we see and even hide. |
by Dark Shadows
Healing words overflowing with hope.Loved it. |
by Lioness
You know this kind of reminds me of when we're sick or stressed, it can take us longer to heal if we don't take care of our emotions. |
by Paul Gondwe
Perhaps these scars will remain hidden and unseen, |
by Meme
This is a master piece Pinky !! |
by Maple Tree
I love this piece..... The simplistic and elegant way you write is priceless.... Very inspirational... the ending made me teary... wonderful! |
Very true indeed; no aid can cure deep wounds, only the will to claim victory always through the help of ones folks. With unconditional care and concern, one can survive any emotional setback or engraved physical scars. Keeping faith ever strong and been optimistic is the key to peace of mind. The imagery is very vivid, playing each stanza like a motion picture. An exquisitely inspiring poem, very thoughtful and heart warming. I can feel the fear through the words, then a glimmer of hope to end it all, happily ever after. Keep it up! take care :-). |