This is good. Theres real meaning. This is a really good use of imagery in the first and third stanzas and the second really makes you think of how you think of the world. I love it. 5/5 :)
-Angel

This is really a great work.. a real Dark poem.. i loved the way you have choosen ur words to explain the Darkness...short and sweet...:) great work ..:) 5/5

Dark poems really entice me and make me feel I'm watching some kind of horror movie... this poem is the same. Amazing.

I liked it has good meaning and made a good picture in my head 5/5

I like the darkness in ur poem, and the idea of Monsters wearing Mask of Black is amazing:)
I love ur writings 5/5:)

I love dark poems and this one is awesome... Great job!

Its really good and great bringing it together very well job

Very interesting:D

You have successfully freaked me out!

I loved it! ^_^

Ahh Kris I love this, It's dark and scary and I love the rhyming too. . . . its so mysterious too, but mosters are such. . . you know what what they're creeping for, you dont know what they're searching for, don't know what they exist for. . middle stanza fit nicely. . . the mention of both above and down.. nicely done :)

Lol... okay this may sound a bit weird but this so reminds me of harry potter... you know the dementors and the death eaters... anyway i thought it was really good. deep and dark i like that. your flow was really good, the story was as well.. amazing 5.5

Absolutely love!
So detailed. :)) <3

I loved the flow and the message.Great write.

I thought this to be an interesting poem. nice flow with the rhyming done here. and your imagery was really neat. i could see what you mean with all the demons tricking us to believe that the angels and god are the evil ones when they themselves are. how they have that veil over their eyes yet they appear as wolves in sheeps clothing. nice write. :)