I swear you're doing this on purpose
this is really good there is alot of emotion throughout the entire thing i love it :)
-Angel

Wow... Cupcake...
That was just.... Well.. I don't have a word... It left me speechless from the power of the sadness.

5/5

- Shining Star!

FANTASTIC!!!!!!!

enough said.
~lost angel

Another tear rolls down my cheek,
another sleepless night tonight,
I can't let you know all of this though,
so I hold it in with all my might.

^^ I love this and I so get these moments

with you, life seemed so simple

^ love this too and I relate and how that person makes ur world go round

I can't tell you how I feel,
it hurts to have to keep it in,
I really wish you could see,
all of this love I have within.

^^ I really like this stanza and ur entire poem is fantastic and really reaches within the reader and I can relate to every single lil bit u wrote

Right now we are talking again
and I really don't want that to end,
so I will cherish the moments I do have,
even if I have to just call you a friend...

^^ this is my most favorite and really reaches out to me more,,u have amazingly written this piece and has fantastic rhyme,,u did a really great job I loved it 5/5