by hehasmyheart Jan 24, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I wrote this poem for my friend casey and his fiancee casey passed away jan 18 2012 he was only 21 rip casey |
by hehasmyheart
Thanks |
by hehasmyheart
Ok no more english grammar i wrote this poem how i wanted it to be written im not trying to be rude but i dont need an english profectionist in my comments plz and thank you |
So sorrowful and heartbreaking! I really found myself related to it. First, the rhyming is perfect but each line is too long. But even though the simple message in each line is very strong. Second, each line should begin with a capital letter. |