by abuzubayr Jan 24, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Its been awhile |
An observation, your "i" is suppose to be in capital letter "I" not small. |
Beautiful poem. Written from the heart, yearning for a lost love. Using rhymes is a good idea but it's suitable in short poems for children such as nursery rhymes than poems. Keep up the good talent, MashAllah. :-) |
Beautiiful keep writing your really good :) |