I LOVE THIS POEM, IT MAKES ME FEEL SAFER AND LESS LONELY. I LOVE THIS GUY, WE MET IN GYM CLASS, I WAS ALL HOT AND SWEATY BUT HE STILL HAD A GOOD TIME WITH ME, AND WE'VE HAD LOTS OF GOOD TIMES SINCE. HE BROKE UP WITH ME LAST WEEK, HE SAID DOESN'T CARE ABOUT ME ANYMORE. I HAD BEEN LYING TO MYSELF ABOUT SEEING IT COMING. EVEN THOUGH I SEEM ON THE OUTSIDE TO BE HAVING A GOOD TIME WHEN I'M WITH HIM AT SCHOOL, I GO HOME AND CRY FOR A WHILE. I REALLY LOVE HIM AND MISS HIM, IT'S KILLING ME. I LOVE YOUR POEM, WRITE ON.

I READ YOUR POEM AGAIN, IT BROUGHT ME BACK TO THAT FEELING OF POUR COMPASSION. TO THE NIGHTMARE I'M SURROUNDED IN AND THE PRESNECE'S SENT I GROW AROUND! AWESOME WORK, YOU SURE GOT TALENT!