Comments : Young girl

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is sweet and so heartfelt. Great job with emotion, simpathy, empathy, and showing your heart and soul. Trust me this is amazing piece. The flow got messed up a bit but the rhyme scheme and word choice made up for that. Fantastic piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley Nicole

    Thankyou sweetheart <3

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Actually thanks for writing it...

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley Nicole

    Aww that was sweet :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Awww this is so amazing
    I love this poem it shows emotions and it's so touching it really is amazing how you write your poems

    Loved the read beautiful
    5/5 frm meeee

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley Nicole

    Aww thankyou :)