by Melpomene
Just posting my comment from Britt's contest. |
by Jordan
"She's spinning out of control |
by Britt
I think this is favorite of the contest from you. I feel like I've told you that before already, but you had a few poems that I was just blown away with, this was one of them. |
by silvershoes
Thanks so much for the suggestions, guys! Jordan, I edited the first stanza and took out the hyphen in the second stanza. I think it looks better now. |
Hallelujah,Hallelujah... |
by Decayed
So Jane... those were your poems which I favored them almost through all rounds! Amazing... :) |
Well penned from the dark corners of the heart. |
by Saerelune
"She's spinning out of control |
I thought of someone being observed by someone else.I had both of them in my mind with the intro,"she is spinning" the whole ballet show scenario. I love how this writer gives the darkness of the piece away in the title by adding the "Black" to it.. the tricky part is that you only realize that when you're done reading. |
by Nicko
Hey you, a very well written poem, from a poet who obviously understands the craft. Mature, succinct and full of depth. As to the full meaning? well I will leave to the poet, but we can all take something different from this poem which helps make it so magical. |
An eye catching title matching an equally remarkable verse, written from a protectors (a parent, a sib or a close friend) point of view, very touching. The poetess has projected the anguish of a concerned parent/sib/close friend in a 3rd person, so poignantly. |
by Emily
This poem really touched me. So many times I have felt this way. |