God's Plans

by The Poet Behind The Poems   Jan 25, 2012


Just turned seventeen, in the hospital bed
She looks at the screen and see's a head
Half her smile could light up the sky
to see her little child with her lovers eyes.

Everyone said it will be tough , think what's right
But how could she escape from her dreams every night
With tears in her eyes and touching of her hands
she knows the beautiful life is part of Gods plans.

Years has past she's doing just fine
Her voice brings fairytales to life at bedtime
With a smile and a kiss from her baby girl
she will never regret bringing her into the world.

I told her if anything happened I would stay
Our angels looking more like her everyday
With tears in my eyes and touching of my hands
i'm thankful everyday she's part of Gods plans.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Beautiful and touching poem with a fantastic flow. this warmed my heart. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by MyaEve

    GAAHHH. Your such a wonderful poet, Tony, I'm jealous!

    The first stanza was amazing. As soon as I read the first few lines, I was flooded in emotions of happiness.

    Half her smile could light up the sky
    to see her little child with her lovers eyes.

    ^^^
    These lines made the stanza stand out. The first two lines simply told me that a soon to be adult just had a baby. Then as I continued to read, I could feel the joy of the woman as she saw her beautiful baby.

    Also, the second stanza was easy to understand. The flow of words made it poetic, but the happiness of proving everything wrong was what made it terrific.

    To cut this comment short, the last two stanza's quickly moved down the life of the young woman and newly born baby. I could see the twinkling in the mother's eyes as she saw her package of joy growing up to be a gift sent from Heaven.

    Well written poem , Tony. The love in this poem was stunning. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    I agree with all of the above

    This is so beautiful
    How you wrote each line
    I loved the read

    Ahhh of course I'm going to give you 5/5

    Just amazing blown away sweetie(:

  • 12 years ago

    by Saerelune

    I don't care much about the grammatical errors, since I'm sure with a little bit of research that could be fixed in no time. :) I can tell that you know how to bring forth emotion, and you sure are getting comfy in that rhyming structure, eh? =p To be honest I think I've read better rhymes by you, but I also have to admit that there's some little gems scattered about this piece. Such as: "Her voice brings fairytales to life at bedtime" or "Half her smile could light up the sky".

  • 12 years ago

    by UndeadGrace

    5/5 very beautiful

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