Comments : Moonbeam

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    I really liked the flow here and the calm passion depicted. Lovely write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi karla

    thanks for this kind words, first linie is borrowed from Shelley, one on the great poetic gang

    br
    Ole

  • 12 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Hi

    You have been able to renew Shelly, that is breaking news. Love it, smiling all day

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Such a lovely write with fervent emotions :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi all kind comments and guides are more than welcome, I send my thanks to you for this

    Yes first line i from one of the "gang" Shelley, but the rest is pure me,

    br
    Ole

  • 12 years ago

    by Mostafa

    Torrid feelings, I like the rhyme it flows nicely : )

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi

    thanks a lot

    ole