Stunning i no how hard this form of poerty can be ... not much can be said flawless piece ... outstanding x

Alright Myryn :)

I had my eye on this, too :) I liked it so much when I read it there, and now, knowing that you've written it gives it.... luster :)

Shakespeare would like your tribute, Myryn. I really liked the format and your choice of words. A winner for sure.

I've never heard of this form before, and you did wonders with it! I didn't think many would take up the offer and do a form for that round, but of course you would :)

You had me right from the beginning with your first line, it drew me in and made me want to know more. You didn't disappoint throughout.

"The fairest queen of seven sins
With orchid eyes and glittered skin."

This has to be my favorite part, the beauty of it and the imagery just wow me here. Orchid eyes - I have such a beautiful image in my head. This is lovely!

I've never heard of this form either but it does sound like a very challenging form! I think you have done it awesomelly!

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You have done a beautiful job on the form...
the flow is smooth and nothing seems to be forced here. I have tried this form and it's so tough but you make it sound so easy to write.

I loved the imagery, ...
/The fairest queen of seven sins
With orchid eyes and glittered skin.
//
beautiful descriptions specially the orchid eyes.

well written piece.

I love this piece. There's something so sophisticated about a poem whose subject is a dark "heroin" of sorts.

"She wears the moon around her wrist,
Like a hexed trinket of a faun
Ominous; the sun's dream at dawn."

^ I love the imagery, personification and metaphoric pictures you've painted. It's a stunning opening stanza

"Sinners, in her presence exist.
The fairest queen of seven sins
With orchid eyes and glittered skin."

^ I imagine this "queen" being absolutely, painfully and dangerously beautiful, so much so that she entices everyone into committing sin. "Orchid eyes" is a gorgeous metaphor. Very original.

"She's the epitome of kitsch twist,
Of bouncing breasts and untamed lips
Miming the sweet sway of her hips."

^ I have to admit, I wasn't familiar with Kitsch Twist so I googled it, and am I right in understanding it to be a style of fashion?? If so, this added further depth to the visualising of the persona. If I'm wrong in my understanding, please help!!

"Who among us does not insist?
The virgin who's unworn and fresh
Perhaps, the valiant, full of flesh?"

^ The questions in this stanza really change the tone of the poem, I liked it a lot. I didn't imagine her being a virgin, but somehow this makes her even more dangerous!!!

"The cold hands of death shall persist.
The noble, we'll no longer be
As she whispers, airy fairy."

^ A very eery ending I must say! The overall poem's voice changes back and forth between beauty and evil intent. If this was purposeful, then it was very clever of you. It takes the reader on a journey. Draws us in and then bites us on the nose!

I really liked the form and thought you did it well

Good job

Brilliant, enjoyable and sheer talent rings true in this stunning piece

Excellent. Great form, great flow, imagery is there. It goes being a poem of grandeur to becoming something sultry and dark. Few poems can start as something and then finish on the opposite end of the scale.

Well done. 5/5

This form Is beautiful and you gave It life.... what a breathtaking piece, filled with a powerful and explosive word display.... the mystical feel and Imagery is just wonderful.... really enjoyed this piece, well done~